(http://tw.youtube.com/watch?v=Ak-cjqFJGhY)
The difference between learning English in an English-speaking country and not an English-speaking one is mentioned in this video: that is, the pronunciation of the native teacher and the way students learn English are more helpful to them than the way they were taught in their native countries. Still, there are other opinions may be against these thoughts.
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It's great that you found a video proving your viewpoints of your essay paper. But you might find some more convincing example because a video a little commercial like this one may not be so convincing. Or maybe you would like to use some personal experiences to illustrate that. About pronunciation.
This video really can emphasize your opinions even though it is a little like advertising. But I think you still have to add some of your experince about your abroad life.
You use a video to support the argument you want to discuss. This is a great way to appeal the audience, but we can't be convinced by the video actually. From the video, we can see that it mention a problem about pronunciation. I think "pronunciation" may be the weaknees of your issue paper. I sugget that you had better find more strong evidence to support what you want to express.
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