Original Draft

At first, I would have the introduction to the differences between learning English abroad and learning English in your own nation. Then I will begin to provide examples from the annotations in the following paragraphs. First, we can see a commercial video for a language school. In the commercial, we would find out that the accent is one of the major issues when speaking of learning English. Therefore, we would look at another material which is about accent, too. We can see that the issue of accent is quite important for immigrants. Next, we would compare another material which is regarding to hoe German immigrants adjust to new American life. We can get a general idea about it is really necessary to immerse yourself in American culture in order to learn English well. Finally, we would examine ways of learning English and some personal experiences of my Aunt who immigrate to the United States to conclude my paper.